DubiousArtisan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Birth]

Wow, stunning! Simply stunning!

That was crazy and awesome! I liked the style and the storythat evolved, not to mention the redicualously awesome animation. This deserves a much much higher score then it has so far. Keep up the mind blowing work!

[Gohan Goes Fishing]

Like the animation, but not the setting.

Your gonna have to face the fact that DBZ has been overused, you need to create some original content, your charactor detail was good, and the fighting scenes were pretty good although it should be a litter faster. But you really need to work on the energy blasts, and the terrain was lacking, not to mention a lack of plot besides the standard and bland DBZ 'bad guys have come to earth, lets kill them' storyline was a rather big drawback. But you have good potential, you just need to put your skills to your own ideas and you should excel

[Mana Realm Chapter 1]

This has some great potential

Its a great job so far but it really does need music, and i tryed to gauge my opinion with the fact that the final version will. I can't wait to see it when its done. Now for the constructive criticism, are you ready? good. For starters the speed really needs to be changed, i thought the battle was way to slow, a battle like that would be over reletivly quickly, not done slowly like that, that reminded me of a slow paced game of final fantasy, where you wait for eatch side to attack. while i also thought the text was too fast in most cases. The i had to read fast on the intro with the scrolling text, a little too fast. And the graphics need some touchups, the zoomed out views of the armys are rather strange, and how they all had there blink synced up (but i know that would be hard to change). I do like the charactor models though, they are throughly enjoyable, scenery could use some more work but i also understand how tiem consuming redrawing it detailed is. The monsters are neat, and the arrow volleys, i liked that. Im curious to find out why there fighting the monsters.

Wow, i wrote alot, hope thats not too much.
Just one last question, what FPS is that? and how long have you spent so far?

[Don't Be Fooled]

I like it too bad it won't stay

that was a good attempt to get more of the truth out, and nicly done, it was slick. goodjob

SpeedyPac responds:

Thanks, it took me like 30 minutes to make. I could always fix it up and re submit it, maybe it'll stay then.

[T2:After The Mission]

Haha, pretty clever spoof of the Gov. there.

Hehe i liked it, quite funny. It really needs voice actors though, then it has the possibility to shine. But like i said, pretty funny. Haha, Terminator 5: cat-face. I can already see it now.

[Lil Ninja]

Very cool... I like your style.

That was awesome, the style is great, deffinitly stick to it. I don't know if leaving it uncolored at the end was intentionaly like that or if you just ran out of patience, but i thought it was a good move. Altough it was a little hard to understand what was going on. Not much of a story either, i hope to see a better one in your next installment.

[City of darkness Part I]

A decent attempt

That wasn't awfull, it wasn't great either. It would have been nice if it had a little more set-up, exspecialy for a movie of this genre. And i don't know if it was just me, but a neon green guy in this setting looks rather goofy. Maybe make him a diffrent color and add some hair or something? The face tweens was kinda weird too, would help if he had something on his head to turn with it. The story progression was pretty good i think, it just didn't have the visual power to make it creepy, or the music to add to it. And actually showing the girl and making it prominant its a father and daughter initialy would help a lot. Keep trying, your next one should be better.

[Romantic Rights]

This was enjoyable i like it

Good video, i like the look/style you guys have going there, altough i was a little disapointed to see you had some slightly violent scenes, its nice once and awhile to see something that doesn't on here, ya know? But overall its pretty solid, good job guys.

[Attack-Ine!]

It was a decent atempt even if it isn't great

I don't know how to take this, im guessing you wern't being serious and this was a parody, but you should have at least exsplained what you were aiming for in the authors comments. If this wasn't a parody you should deffinitly completly rework it, it was horrible in that case. But if it was a parody which im guessing it was it was decent. Nothing that stands out but nothing incredably bad either. Nice try, but work harder on it next time.

[My Brothers an Irishman!]

This is a hilarious concept, and is done well here

I dunno what else to say, but hilarious, well animated, and good sounds. I think you could have added more detail to the older brother to make it apparent how old he is though. even after you said his age it didn't seem to fit, unless he is supposed to look really young for his age. So keep making these episodes, there great!

HappyHarry responds:

he just has really good face cream...